The Greys Chapter 2

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Hi everyone, chapter 2 is up of my novel, I'd appreciate any feedback if anyone reads it.
http://www.booksie.com/other/novel/kalika997/the-greys

Hail Satan!

 

[aikidoka37]

--- In , "ave_satanas@..." <ave_satanas@... wrote:

Hi everyone, chapter 2 is up of my novel, I'd appreciate any feedback if anyone reads it.
http://www.booksie.com/other/novel/kalika997/the-greys

Hail Satan!

I absolutely loved the first one! I can't wait to read the second chapter! ^_^

 

[Myla Limlal]

Very nice I like it. You write so well.
Hail Satan

--- In , "ave_satanas@..." <ave_satanas@... wrote:

Hi everyone, chapter 2 is up of my novel, I'd appreciate any feedback if anyone reads it.
http://www.booksie.com/other/novel/kalika997/the-greys

Hail Satan!

 

[Ca]

I love it you write very well I can't wait for the next chapter.

HAIL SATAN!!!!!
<hr>From: High Priestess Myla Limlal
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Subject: [HellsArmy666] Re: The Greys Chapter 2

  Very nice I like it. You write so well.
Hail Satan

--- In , "ave_satanas@..." <ave_satanas@... wrote:

Hi everyone, chapter 2 is up of my novel, I'd appreciate any feedback if anyone reads it.
http://www.booksie.com/other/novel/kalika997/the-greys

Hail Satan!

 

[korbenloosemore]

Very well done!Cant wait for the rest of the story.
Like how you discribed the greys, and how Lara turns out to be one of us.

Hail Satan and the true Gods of old!

--- In , "ave_satanas@..." <ave_satanas@... wrote:

Hi everyone, chapter 2 is up of my novel, I'd appreciate any feedback if anyone reads it.
http://www.booksie.com/other/novel/kalika997/the-greys

Hail Satan!

 

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Thankyou so much for all the feedback, I got my laptop taken off me this week but I've been working in my free lessons at school so chapter 3 will be up by Sunday at the latest

Hail Satan!

--- In , "High Priestess Myla Limlal" <limlal8@... wrote:

Very nice I like it. You write so well.
Hail Satan


--- In , "ave_satanas@" <ave_satanas@ wrote:

Hi everyone, chapter 2 is up of my novel, I'd appreciate any feedback if anyone reads it.
http://www.booksie.com/other/novel/kalika997/the-greys

Hail Satan!